If i ever seem inconsiderate
I don’t really mean to
I seem sometimes like that
When I don’t know what to do
Its just a way a part of me
I know you’re hurting
Can’t do a thing
We can only chat
Take the chance
May be I’ll write something
That’ll lift your mood
Make you smile
Make you happy even for a while
Or even a piece of advice
That”ll change your life
Don’t know
Am I naive ?
Am I sincere ?
Am I just too clear ?
i know you’re far
While my keyboard is near
I type away to save the day
But may be all I do
Is make it worse, should I pray?
You only reply when you wanna say
A word or two
Meaning its ok
Yet I see right through your smiley face
You cry online, my heart aches blind
I can’t see your tears but it hurts like their mine
Am I throwing my time, or helping you be fine?
The answer to that is with you princess online
Am I sincere ?
Am I just too clear ?
i know you’re far
While my keyboard is near
I type away to save the day
But may be all I do
Is make it worse, should I pray?
I know real life doesn’t work that way
I know words don’t take away the pain
I know I can try all I want
May be nothing will change
But I still try
May be I’m an idiot or just Insane
May be I know too well what is pain
& I don’t want anyone to feel that ever again
Am I sincere ?
Am I just too clear ?
i know you’re far
While my keyboard is near
I type away to save the day
But may be all I do
Is make it worse, should I pray?
Even if I lose each & every day
Every moment of sleep , instant I’m awake
If I think it’ll help you
I’ll type away to save the day
Thats the kind of guy I am
I just can’t change
what a fantastic way to clear up your mind and get yourself in good shape…
keep typing,
your writing is inspirational and powerful…
enjoy a fabulous Saturday.
your talent rocks.
xx
Your writing is absolutely beautiful!
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welcome in,
have fun at the rally!
🙂
Very good stuff. Nice use of repetition and some subtle rhymes.
Thanks for sharing.
Is this about long distance love? I can relate, especially with the frustration of not being able to hold your loved one when he needs you, and all you have is chat and the phone. Thanks for sharing!
The end was my favorite:
I’ll type away to save the day
Thats the kind of guy I am
I just can’t change
Nice. Keep typing–I think your words probably make a big difference to the princess.
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I love this. Your words will most certainly make a big difference to your girl.
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